Wednesday, March 16, 2016
Elevator Pitch No.3
As my previous pitch I got a lot of positive feedback and I enjoyed reading it because a few people were saying that this is a great idea. One thing that stood out to me about the comments was that I should be more formal in my elevator pitch, and I understand as to why one would say that, I don't necessarily agree with it because of what my product is. And one this is that was silly is that one comment said that I should put what material my product is in the pitch but I don't that is necessary. I, again, did not change much in my pitch since I keep getting good feedback, I keep assuming that my pitch is good as it is and I don't really know how I would change it to make it better. So I basically kept it the same.
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Hi Christian,
ReplyDeleteI think the pitch itself is very good and the confidence is definitely there. I enjoyed listening to the pitch and I think there would definitely be market for it. However, in my opinion, the camera angle could be better and the lighting as well. Also, I get your point about wearing more formal clothes. Overall good video and good work on the assignment!
You can check out my pitch at http://flatpeak.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html
Brian D. Kim