I didn't actually change much from the last elevator pitch, I added a few points like where I plan to sell my product and to who and also added a better explanation of what it was. So here is my second attempt at an elevator pitch:
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
Elevator Pitch No. 2
I liked reading the feedback from my last pitch. It was mostly good and some people did point out a few points that I should have focused on like a better explanation of where I am gonna sell my product and who am I gonna sell it to and also competition. There was one point which I thought was simply silly and that was to explain how was I going about to create and manufacturing; I believe that was silly since it would take to much time and I was not actually important to say in an elevator pitch.
I didn't actually change much from the last elevator pitch, I added a few points like where I plan to sell my product and to who and also added a better explanation of what it was. So here is my second attempt at an elevator pitch:
I didn't actually change much from the last elevator pitch, I added a few points like where I plan to sell my product and to who and also added a better explanation of what it was. So here is my second attempt at an elevator pitch:
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Hey Christian,
ReplyDeleteThis is truly one of the best ideas I’ve seen in a while. Not because its revolutionary or life changing in any way but because its simple, effective and makes an incremental improvement in your customers’ lives. A lot of people have their eyes set on “revolutionary” ideas but I think yours is very realistic and I really hope to see your product in stores one day soon.
My post: http://ryangsharpe.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Chris-
ReplyDeleteI like your idea! I have a skateboard, too, and I definitely could understand your customer’s problem! What would you make the strap out of, and would it cause strain on one side of my body, if I used it? I think you have the ideas of creating a good elevator pitch, but it would help to be a little more formal next time.
Our elevator pitches and our venture ideas are not that similar at all, but I am excited on how they will both turn out. Here is the link to my elevator pitch, if you would like to see it: http://kwallaceent.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Good luck!
Kate
Hello Chris,
ReplyDeleteI really found your idea to be very interesting! I'm always carrying my backpack everywhere I go so this is definitely an idea that can be marketable. In my opinion, your pitch is very good! You look a little busy and not too focused but it was a great video! My pitch also focuses on students! Here's a link: http://jeromerimpos.blogspot.com/2016/02/campus-shuttle-elevator-pitch-2.html
Hey, Chris! I'm back at it again with another comment. Your idea is really cool! I don't have a skateboard, but I can definitely see the need for it especially on college campuses. Your pitch overall was good too. Very straightforward and to the point and not too long. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI didn't do any of the elevator pitch videos, but feel free to check out the rest of my blog anyway (or don't): nika-uf-ent3003.blogspot.com
Hi Christian,
ReplyDeleteI have never owned skateboard, but I feel like you have a nice idea. I feel like you could extend the idea to more wide arrange of things, such as making the bands for the textbooks. Many of people has complained about textbooks than skateboards, I believe if you would expand the market if you add the capability of holding textbooks. Here is the link to my elevator pitch, check it out if you have time. http://jzent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no2.html